Have a trip

My family was very happy at this moment. It started when my mother was eager to go to Bangkok, a small town and a nice town. We went to the capital city of Thailand, that's Bangkok. The first time I stepped my feet, I think this town is the same as Jakarta. But I was wrong. After I see the real of Bangkok city I felt very happy to have a trip there.
I went to the nice town to a company my mother to have a work there for 1 week. I walk there until night ask me to sleep. My leg was very hurt, because I have walk around from the afternoon until night.
My mom always wanted to throw up if we walk around the China town in Bangkok. It smelt like a pork, but only my mom knew the smell of that meat.
I bought many souvenirs for my best friends and me and also my teacher. My class friends are too many I think, so I only buy for my 4 best friend. I don't tell my class friend if I only gave to my 4 best friend (sorry for this guys....)
I don't like Bangkok again. Because I am so boring at there. This is the complicated town, because, every writting or language is Thai language. Not many people can speak english as Indonesian or other countries.
My father asked me to go to the palace. I saw a big scupture there, it is made from gold. If we sold it would be millions dollar. The title of the scupture is "Sleeping Buddha". I think it is Budha Gautama. The palace name is Wat Arun. If we wanted to go to see the scupture, we have to put our sandals in the corner of the building. We only paid for 100 Bath.
In Bangkok, the government provides a good public transportation then in Jakarta. It has 2 modern system of transportation. It has, MRT and Sky Train, it will bring you to the place you like, and you don't have to trap in a traffic jam any more.
Thursday was the last day we were at Bangkok, I had to go to Singapore first, because I wanted to go around Singapore before we went back to Jakarta, I would say the last words, "GOOD BYE BANGKOK!" Now I change my mind, I sad to leave Bangkok (hick...hick...hick...my tears drops).
At Singapore, I watched a competition, the compotition was about touch the car until 1 day or 24 hour. It would be hot for touch the car until 1 day, because the sun shine was very hot. The prize is the car that he or she touched.
But I'm sad, Only one day I went to Singapore. But it's not realy one day, because we step our first feet to Singapore was 11 o'clock at midnight. And we ate in Plaza Singapore. We ate in Mc donald, In there my father's jacket was left behind, he was so sad about that. Plaza Singapore was a shopping centre near Terminal MRT, Dhouby Ghaut.
And it took half an hour go to the hotel from the airport, so we started to register to the hotel in 12 o'clock at midnight.
We had to go home in 12 o'clock afternoon then. So "GOOD BYE SINGAPORE, WELCOME JAKARTA, MY HOME."